「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

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「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

眾所周知,雅思寫作是大家英語學習成果的一個輸出表現。那麼沒有輸入自然就沒有輸出。在明白了這個道理之後,很多烤鴨在備考階段都會大量地閱讀一些寫作範文。這的確是行之有效的辦法。在此非常感謝那些選擇了《雅思寫作三人行——經典範文篇》的烤鴨們。愛你們呦。


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


(雅思寫作三人行)

但與此同時,也有一些烤鴨開始抱怨說:範文倒是讀了不少,但是就沒讀到自己當天考試的那一篇。仰天長嘆,感覺自己和雅思的孽緣還是未了。難道我們讀例文,非得讀到我們在考場中考的那一篇嗎?那概率是不是也太低了呢?


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


今天陸哲老師帶著大家一起說說,如何合理地使用我們讀過的那些範文。


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

例如,今年的6月13日的考題為:

Some people say individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20190613

「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

這著實是一個老題重現,其實在2014年的時候考過這個題目的原型。並且在2018年的時候,這個題目的變形也在考場中和大家見過面。雖如此,在備考階段考生讀過原題範文的概率還是極其有限。


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


那麼我們先來看看2018年它的變形題目是什麼樣的,並附送一篇範文。

Governments should make people responsible for looking after their local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20180414

In most places of the world, environmental problems are plaguing both governments and their people, and accordingly those governments are trying many methods to cope with environmental pollution. One of these methods is giving the local people responsibility for looking after the local environment. From my perspective, this is definitely a futile way.

Initially, in spite of the awareness that the public have for protecting the environment, most of them have no professional knowledge or skills to be responsible for dealing with environmental issues. Some pollutants are invisible or intangible, and they can only be detected and measured by professional equipment that the public do not have or are not able to operate. Instead, obviously some governmental offices and research institutes are the organizations with the ability for doing this.

Additionally, local people have no power of law enforcement. Once they discover someone or some factories are polluting their local environment, there is still no effective way for them to stop the detrimental behaviors. What they can do is inform related governmental offices only. This is to say, governments ought to be the role with the most responsibility for suppressing the environmental pollution.

Eventually, it is undeniable that every individual should be involved in protecting the environment. Notwithstanding, what they can do is cooperate with governments, follow their instructions and obey related rules and regulations. Most people have no initiative but they are enforced by governments. Hence, the public participation in environmental issues is not the excuse for governments to pass the buck.

To sum up, protecting the environment is the inescapable responsibility of governments. Meanwhile, individuals do play significant roles in this, and however in most cases what individuals can do is restricted or strongly recommended by some rules or policies from governments. By analogy, giving the public responsibility for supervising their local environment does not make any sense.

那我們該如何利用這篇範文,寫出一篇符合20190613題目要求的文章呢?其實方法有很多。但是各位烤鴨的基礎不同,所以要選擇自己合適的方式。我們逐個分析講解一下。


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


一、用觀點和話題詞彙


毫無疑問,這兩個題目的話題分類都是環境類話題,並且都是在強調承擔環保責任方面的論述。對於那些基礎較好的烤鴨們而言,完全可以在閱讀範文的時候,整理出一些話題詞彙和高分用法。化為己用,然後在自己的文章裡面果斷將其表達出來。這樣,不僅文章仍然有自己特色,也很容易就能滿足高分數段的評分標準。


「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?


二、用段落或句子

如果烤鴨們英語基礎不是十分給力,那麼就可以將這個範文的主體段落直接應用於自己的文章之中。即使段落不能完全應用,句子的使用還是非常有可能的。所以,針對那些基礎薄弱,尤其是語法基礎較弱的考生而言,背誦段落,記憶句子是非常有效的辦法。當然,在記憶開頭段和結尾段的時候大家一定要慎重。因為開頭段和結尾段都應該十分對題,如果不是一個題目,其實很難通用。但是主體段落,只要是同一類別話題,通用性較高。

「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

三、背誦全文

其實,這是一個不是辦法的辦法。通常而言針對那些基礎非常有限的同學,我們才會要求大家背誦全文。背誦全文之後,大家在考場中自然可以將全文寫出。但是,如此一來在問題迴應程度一項的得分通常不會太高。除非真的是考到了背過範文的題目。否則此項得分都比較有限。但是,其他幾項得分會比較理想。平均之後,也很可能能夠達到考生的分數要求。

「陸哲說」讀了那麼多寫作例文,你會將其合理應用嗎?

總而言之,背誦是沒有辦法的辦法。基礎較好的烤鴨們應該學會分析範文,總結重點內容,並且將其化為己用。此為寫作之道也。

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