烤鴨の指南系列
今天我們來聊一波雅思寫作。
很多烤鴨N刷的時候都會發現一個令人痛心的事實，那就是，寫作投入產出比太特麼低了。
為什麼你看了那麼技巧，積累了那麼多詞彙，然而還是沒有什麼卵用？
這很可能是因為，考官看了你的作文開頭就怒扣了一筆。
話不多說，快來跟AI一起避開這些考官看了想打人的大坑，重新做鴨。
扣分第一式：中式英語
Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
血案：In our life, there are always some moments which make yourheart flower opened angrily……
Topic2-Is there fairness in today’s business world?
血案：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I alwayschopped when I go out buy things……
Topic 3-The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he willget “bao ying”.
扣分第二式：觀點模糊態度曖昧
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
血案：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
扣分第三式：偏離主題
Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
血案：I think we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
扣分第四式：語法錯誤慘不忍睹
Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished?
血案：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.
扣分第五式：過分簡單沒有重點
Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
血案：This issue is very important, let’s talk about it!
扣分第六式：意思重複原地踏步
Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
血案：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. Andit is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimesharmful to our society.
扣分第七式：中國俗語胡亂翻譯
Topic-Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/herfamily?
血案：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, chicken bore chicken, mouse’s son can make hole.
扣分第八式：觀點武斷 態度強硬
Topic-The solution to the traffic problem
血案：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy!For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.
好了，今天烤鴨指南就到這裡，我們下期再會~
原文素材來源：新浪教育
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